Recently, the phenomenon of studying in abroad has grown a lot, despite the existence of brilliant scientists that educated in local universities. The study in overseas brings many advantages to the students who travel for education. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze some benefits of study in overseas.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support traveling to studying in abroad. At first, although education in foreign countries may have some difficulties such as financial and emotional issues, it has many scientific advantages. The students can study in the higher level of science in advanced countries. For example, the student can study in reputed universities such as Harvard and Cambridge as well as learn higher level science from the best professors.
In addition, while the students from the third would have fewer opportunities to find a job in their own countries, they could get a good job in overseas. The big renowned companies in advanced countries would employ the graduated people from reputed colleges. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by Tehran University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of graduate students from universities in abroad have employed by big companies like Microsoft and never turned to their motherland.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on the phenomenon, I profoundly believe that the positive effects of education in advanced countries are far outweighed its drawbacks.
- Some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women To what extent do you agree with this statement Support your point of view with reasons andexamples from your own experience 62
- Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.'Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience. 73
- Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 72
- It is said that for some developed countries, tourism may cause some disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading. 85
- Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.'Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience. 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, third, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42735042735 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98446069248 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8817192508 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.454545455 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.25397266985 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239122570507 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102128689372 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815233529528 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131440617967 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969181706468 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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