In under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said opposite as well. Give your opinion.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in few countries is fully developed like USA, Canada and England but few counties now developing like India and Pakistan . There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one in that tourism came in small countries its very well can only contribute to because in small countries people not like it, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of tourism come in underdeveloped countries, every countries rules and regulation is different, so people create a problems. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only realised its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today’s ever-changing lifestyles. Besides, it impact on country far- reaching indeed. Hence, it is apparent why many are against tourism maximize the country beauty. So many people came for tour and lots of people go for tour.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of tourism people see beauty of country are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02649006623 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77870541863 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.736009873 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106490062334 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334633221434 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380513883249 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641853369055 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206348830776 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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