In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The tourism industry is crucial for many underdeveloped countries. It helps them to progress and step towards development. Many argue that tourism industry has many disadvantages, on the other hand, some believe that there are more advantages. Both sides will be critiqued before the reasoned conclusion is found.
To begin with, it is said that many underdeveloped countries are high risk for tourists. This is apparent since last few decades. For example, last week in Bangladesh a tourist from Japan and another from Italy were shot dead by the ‘Islamic State terrorist group. This shows that underdeveloped nations are not safe as they lack solid security measures. Thus, in such type of countries tourism industry has disadvantages at it tarnishes countries reputation.
Conversely, in many developing countries tourism is an advantage as they bring much of foreign currency and fosters local businesses. For instance, Nepal, the Himalayan nation’s much of the income comes from tourism. It boosts local hospitality industry significantly. When looking at this example it is clear that this industry has clear advantages.
After diligently analyzing both views it is believed that the positive side weighs heavier than the negative one. In a nutshell, it is predicted that in years to come tourism will reach its heights by contributing much to the countries economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47222222222 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03782735878 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3512767442 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143499152398 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473552327642 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477392698943 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852335306584 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348017402325 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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