University experience is more important than a university's degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
These days people tend to think that the experience gained in university life is more important than an educational degree in job market. While others are still sure that the degree on its own give more value to the job seekers. This essay will confirm that the university life experience is more beneficial than the degree itself.
The educational process in university is more complicated than the one pupils go through in schools. Students of higher educational establishments have to get used to be more independent and own the responsibility for their fails more frequently than it was in school days. For instance, university professors are usually not this tolerant to students being late to sessions and thus don't usually care about helping apprentices to learn the missed lecture materials.
Another important point is that student who moved away from their homes to the universities also face a lot daily life problems which previously could be addressed by their parents. For example, they have to start minding their own budget and even find some temporary job to pay the own bills. Sometimes it appears to be pretty hard for youth ones to safe some money by properly deciding cooking versus buying cooked food or taking a proper care of their cloths versus just buying new ones. This experience becomes irreplaceable for an adult life of a working individual.
In conclusion, although the educational degree is undoubtedly important for getting a good job, I believe that the experience people get during their university life better prepares them to the challenges in their future personal and professional life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...an an educational degree in job market. While others are still sure that the degree o...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one pupil', 'a pupil', or simply 'pupils'?
Suggestion: one pupil; a pupil; pupils
...university is more complicated than the one pupils go through in schools. Students of high...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tudents being late to sessions and thus dont usually care about helping apprentices ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15037593985 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78087766179 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7416908187 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.545454545 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397466429759 0.242375264174 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172966479718 0.0925447433944 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150421856487 0.071462118173 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266070690235 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159565579901 0.0609392437508 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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