Recently, the phenomenon of violence on TV and movies, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that watching violent movies can be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly destroying and negative by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that violence can be a minus generally, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree with violent movies are influential to spread crime in society. At first, they said that violent movies are using just as an entertainment, those people who like to watch them. However, they do not know their nerves and behavior can be ruined by the violence. For example, the violent can affect on people's different behavior such as driving and communication.
In addition, the TV news channels display violence in their news such as wars and terror attacks to spread daily news as their task. But, displaying these pictures can be common and ordinary among people. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of criminals and those people do crimes claimed that they first saw this acts in TV or movies.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the drawbacks effects of displaying violence far outweighed its advantages in entertainment.
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but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22746781116 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94697001104 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613733905579 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1465505995 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.727272727 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239304609829 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835545121325 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075358612651 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127155276253 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915256325093 0.0609392437508 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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