The violence portrayed on T.V and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most controversal issues today relates to how tv can influence society today in a negative side such as violence and crime. I firmly agree with the statement above.
I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
I feel strongly that people may become criminal can be a primary source for influence in this way.
The reason for this is that violence portrayed can play an important role in society.
In addition, movies leads could be a major aspect that relates to a modern society these days, so people must pay close attention to it.
I feel just as convinced that violence shown in the news and movies leads has profound influences on society these days.
it is always argue that in fact the importance of violence on tv must not be overlooked because people who watch can affect in criminals attitudes . Futheremore, modern tv will continue to influence the future of crime.
For instance, nationality would prefer modern tv instead of crime
In conclusion, watching movies, it has now been shown that not only can encourage violence, but also the people may become criminals too. it is expected that this trend will continue to increase in the future unfortunately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, so, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96666666667 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61619101473 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57619047619 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.97745478 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8181818182 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202894166133 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740072324556 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427751664275 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825581410766 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436794729823 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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