Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of the ambivalence over this matter violence portrayed on the TV and movies leads to an increase in the crime in our society. Many people say that violence portrayed in movies and TV is the cause of the increasing crime in the society, but I sanguinely believe that it not. This essay will further discuss reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion, but one of the most compelling reasons is that it depends on the environment a person living in. Another cogent reason is how the person has been raised by his parents. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that students who lived in the good environment were less violent than the one who was living in the bad. Thus, beneficial ramifications of living in a good environment apparently can be seen.
On the contrary, skeptics conjecture that violence portrayed on TV and in movies affects the human mind. Hence, the person watching violence on TV tend to get violent sooner than the person who does not watch violence on TV.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments from both the sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of watching TV far outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, if, so, then, thus, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85531914894 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69987844067 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56170212766 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9804401935 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.1 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291350965081 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109736072374 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113726011208 0.071462118173 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166343961842 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118306416479 0.0609392437508 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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