Essay topics:
Vitamin d.
Vitamin d was the main topic of the lecture. Firstly, he mentioned that the function of vitamin d is to maintain blood calcium. Furthermore, he highlighted that strong bones and teeth. Moreover, he described big trouble and die rather quickly. Lastly, the speaker suggested that followed by rapid death. In conclusion, lecture provided in depth-details about vitamin d.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, lastly, moreover, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 31.9359605911 22% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 312.0 1207.87684729 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 58.0 242.827586207 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37931034483 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.75966902107 3.92707691288 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98171199497 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 45.0 139.433497537 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.775862068966 0.580463131201 134% => OK
syllable_count: 89.1 379.143842365 24% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 20.5024630542 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 11.4260910007 50.4703680194 23% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.0 104.977214359 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.66666666667 20.9669160288 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309526354995 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145636046982 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147385900003 0.071462118173 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309526354995 0.151781067708 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 12.6369458128 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.8 53.1260098522 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.9458128079 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 55.0591133005 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.94827586207 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.3980295567 54% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.5123152709 57% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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