“ War is an inevitable outcome of life ”.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/ or examples from your own experience, observation or reading.
The idea of inevitable wars is widely debated with many people claiming that wars are the only outcome of our lives. However, there stands another perspective which says that the certainty of wars only depends on humans. In my opinion, wars can totally be avoided, if we try our best to live in peace. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are various reasons why wars are certain to happen. The most conspicuous one is that our society is full of different ideologies and opinions, which hamper its growth and make survival of humans difficult. Moreover, the current situations in the modern world have created a chaos in society. For example, the world is now full of crimes, violence, genocides which have led to devastating effects. Hence, in this scenario, wars are certain to happen in near future.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that we now live in a world where everyone is competing with each other. Moreover, in this rat-race, we have forgotten our values and sacrificed our morals which are important to avoid wars. For instance, even the educated adults fight with each other and have no conscience. Therefore, there is no doubt that in these situations where a man has become an enemy of other, wars are likely to happen.
In view of the arguments outlined above, the impact of wars is prominent in today’s world with varied views and cultures and thus, in my view, wars are yet to happen in future and has made a world an insecure place.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52896526171 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562962962963 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1441947331 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193028049899 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636412903991 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519638190705 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120065410028 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341479317351 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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