We have entered a throw-away society and fill the environment with rubbish. What are the causes and what are your solutions?
Providing our society with the convenience of basic needs is crucial nowadays since the modern pace of life is accelerated much faster than before. Even though, many people claim that in today’s daily life environment are consumed by our throw-away society and filled with rubbish. Further elaboration of both causes and solutions will be discussed in the following essay and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, the pressure of our society is one of the prime causes that lead to an environmental disruption. People are propelled by the fast pace of daily life to travel by private vehicles and to consume food and drink with plastic packaging. As a consequence, nonrenewable resources such as water, oil and gas are being consumed at an unbelievable speed. Toxic and non-degradable rubbish like used batteries and electronic components are not only taking a lot of space of the landfill but also become hidden hazard to our environment.
Last but not the least, the above issues could be fixed or at least mitigated by two solutions. One way to tackle with the current dilemma is to keep up creating new resources which are renewable and eco-friendly to the environment. Another way is to prohibit people from consuming product that generates the unrecyclable rubbish. For example, removing plastic bags and plastic bottle of drinks from the supermarket is the very first step for saving the space of our landfills.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that recyclable resources are the key to tackle with our worsening environment. In a nutshell, a good society should always balance its development with the preservation of natural resources.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, at least, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20216606498 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01837439749 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2162460971 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165401759755 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572097369541 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652414132113 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101176535801 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715770215341 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.