What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented.?
In this fast paced world, new things are invented daily by the people in all around the world some people encourage this growth but others have an opinion ironically about this. In this essay, I am going to deliver my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Every invention has one reason to create this proverb explains that “Necessity is the mother of invention”. So, people are upgrading today to cope with this world, they need plenty of solutions for some problems. Technology is the one which plays a vital role in invention. For instance, GOOGLE invent a driverless car in USA to control traffic and to shun accidents.
On the other hand, it has some cos also. In this upgrading invention, ancient things and methods are being forgetting by the people because of this. For example, in the primitive age bullock carts are used in the agriculture before the invention of tractor. Thus the bullock carts are placed in art galleries and museums in recent years. That is the reason people become more lazy and unhealthy.
To recapitulate, according to my glimpses advantages are fully outweigh it’s disadvantages are. So my opinion fall into the advantages because fostering will lead you to next level and make a life easier than our ancestors without complication.
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...han our ancestors without complication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06103286385 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82759316784 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643192488263 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8169243655 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9230769231 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900579220703 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279418812826 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384118245741 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524279897606 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231592284007 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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