What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
The importance of living in an generation where technologies are constantly changing was always a debatable topic. Many people state that technological invention has helped us in all aspects of life and it is beneficial to mankind. Others reject this notion and argue that invention has many disadvantages. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would further elaborate both advantages and disadvantages of these daily inventions to human life with appropriate reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, in present world innovation is success mantra for everyone. Firstly, technology invention has many advantages in all the fields. For example, invention in farming has helped farmers to reduce their workload, invention in medical sciences helped to cure many dreadful diseases such as cancer, HIV and many more. Several startups helping to reduce the daily life problems. These examples clearly shows the advantages of inventions in different sectors in our daily life.
On the other hand, invention has also few disadvantages. Technology invention leads to more employment of machinery and less human labor which results in unemployment. Another main concern is people are more and more depending upon the machinery which is leading to laziness. From the example it can concluded that the invention is impacting the life of working class people.
In conclusion, after analyzing both disadvantages and advantages in the present world, invention is more boon to society than bane. In a nutshell, it can summarized as inventions has helped us to create a new and better world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
The importance of living in an generation where technologies are const...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'conclude'
Suggestion: conclude
...ng to laziness. From the example it can concluded that the invention is impacting the lif...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'summarize'
Suggestion: summarize
...ociety than bane. In a nutshell, it can summarized as inventions has helped us to create a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41472868217 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97501009326 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4632632555 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3125 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231782490159 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727523797739 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421379038925 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14094374456 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385039478741 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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