What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day

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What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.

Social media is making huge impact in our daily life and extended use is somehow quite harmful as well with different reasons as mentioned below. Various factors of social media is increasing rapidly in our society,which are bringing a lots of changes in each passing day.

First of all the term "Social media" portray different meanings, that includes our Television entertainment, Internet usage etc. Both have numbers of advantages to innovate our life but in parallel numerous disadvantages and risks are involved. For example if we talk about favorable contents of social media we can explore numbers of advantages like gaining knowledge , People can be up to date with changes in their surroundings like in weather, any crime reports or war news. People can contact with peoples instantly without any delay, they can explore a variety of information regarding any item they are looking from social media channels or platforms. We can see numbers of platforms in our daily life and one of the famous are Facebook, You tube, What's app , We chat and etc.

However on other hand, social media is leaving negative foot prints, which are increasing rapidly and have unfavorable impact specially in our young generation leading them to disaster. For example children wasting their time by watching TV programs or cartoons, Youngsters serving most of their time on social media platform just doing idol activities like chatting each others, commenting on forums which they have nothing to do.
All this is also happening due to the fast growth of smart phones in our society to let them busy in social media activities and no outdoor or physical activities.

In conclusion, each innovation has its own pros and cons in parallel and its all depend on us how to utilize in a better way.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, regarding, so, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07070707071 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71063580144 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.6695935635 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.909090909 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181210209833 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065276431548 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323778689876 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955139207519 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023479528654 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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