In this days, the extreme sports have become an entertainment among many of young people. Although there are many advantages of the sport, the extreme sports have presumably dangers for their lovers. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some advantages and disadvantages of adventure sports.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support that extreme sports are damaging besides their benefits. At first, there are many adventure sports and some of more popular are Skiing, Bunjee jumping, Snowboard and wingsuit flying. the young people interested in this kind of exercises that are exciting and funny. For example, in the winter season, Skiing is the more common sport and entertainment among people in Europe.
In addition, although these kinds of adventures are useful for the spirit and moral, they have many dangers for the human's body. the heart attacks and physical injuries of these sport can remain in the body forever. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by BBN University researchers shows that a significant number of people that try to Bunjee Jumping lose their consciousness by heart attack and become involved with cardiovascular diseases.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about adventure sports, my personal sentiment is that these extreme games are dangerous and harmful besides their happiness and rational positive effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43119266055 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70106763144 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573394495413 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0722186642 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.636363636 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14654874042 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063529062394 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055284702602 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889691068364 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560963265167 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.