Nowadays technology has become one of the very essential parts of daily life. These technologies have made our life comfortable and very short. One of them is the computer, it also plays very vital role in our lives. For example: - paying bills, sending information through emails, communicating, we can entertain anywhere by playing games and watching the video, etc… on the contrary side, peoples are wasting a lot of times on social media and playing games on computer and gadget, which has become the obsession. So I am totally agreeing with the statement that, “the opposite is true as computers have proved disappointing in terms of productivity, and have made us less happy and stupid because information is not knowledge”.
Firstly, I’ll like to clarify that using the computer is not bad things but over the uses of the computer have the negative impact on our lives. It effects on our health such as damage eyes slightness, cause headaches, pain in their wrists, arms and neck, etc. Apart from this, rising in cyber-crime such as hacking accounts, leaking information, etc. these all are possible only because of the computer. Through the evolution of the computer, it is easy to find out any information due to which the mind of human beings is becoming the doll. They don’t want to think more, and do research on their requirement of the topic. Without analysis of available information, peoples are just implementing it. So, it results that “information is not knowledge” rather it is harmful to our knowledge.
In other hands, I also believe that it is better to use the computer because the activity early was taking huge time to complete is now we complete just in few time, which is very helpful to uplift the work and life. It is good to see that because of the computer, people around the world is so close, they can earn by sitting inside the room with the help of the internet, we can learn many things, etc… overall invention of the computer has made our life easier.
Thus, everyone should access the computer but should always aware that overuses can affect our lives as well as but has decrease our capacity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... vital role in our lives. For example: - paying bills, sending information throug...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t, which has become the obsession. So I am totally agreeing with the statement that, 'the oppo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
... to complete is now we complete just in few time, which is very helpful to uplift the wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1207.87684729 149% => OK
No of words: 368.0 242.827586207 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90217391304 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 3.92707691288 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76666824612 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 139.433497537 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 379.143842365 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.6157635468 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4576384862 50.4703680194 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134904717921 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395670509844 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481549270647 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763932677668 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263463497991 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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