Which should require more financial support from the government: health or education. To what extent do you agree or disagree, use your experience
The importance of government should support from financial help for education which was always debatable has become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked over the potential impact of recent years. In my opinion, the former preposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems fact is that government should require more financial support for education. Education plays very important role in our life. Education helps to develop the country. Another pivotal aspect of the trend is that children considered as the base for overall development of a nation. Therefore, government should put more emphasis in this sector. Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead. As a case in point, government of Australia is providing quality education to their citizens and this has resulted in a overall growth of society as well as nation.
Elaborating my viewpoints, there are some more merits but one is the crucial effect is that health is an essential factor of the development of the country. By providing free health check up of the residents will increase their productivity. Besides, government should give facilities for those children who do not have money for study. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of government should provide the help for education are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20848056537 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77876497613 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1529338325 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.125 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215412560873 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675984884123 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701454347009 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13020461602 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392594611772 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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