Who is responsible for Climate change, whether Government or industries?
The importance of change climate becomes hotter or colder, was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The important influence of the industries has sparked the controversy over the potential impact on this trend on temperatures variations and global warming in recent years. it can be agreed how much more industries produce more and more it helps that global warming. this essay will elaborate how this responsibility can be related to industries and how the government has your guilt on these events and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why whether responsibility belongs to the government, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that some industries do not agree with global warming rules and do not care about the environment. As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study has shown that in china many companies has close their eyes to green-houses gases throw away on the atmosphere. Therefore, the ONU has been aplying several penalties to control this polution created by china companies.
Another key justification for holding this notion is that the fact of penalties have to be applied. For instance, the government have to be more aggressive with industries that do not care about the global warming and just care about they profit. Hence, it would take down their profit and make they stop to produce too much bad gases.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the importance of government is prominent, although climate change should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15625 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88242078978 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58203125 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6986234928 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18141969926 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058189663542 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456079618094 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992102775114 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174435947327 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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