In this day and age, there are a lot of issues against the governments around the world. Although there are many problems for the inhabitants of our planet, the most important is environmental pollution and increase in the population. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss disadvantages of abovementioned issues.
To begin with, there are various difficulties in front of governments and organizations. The first one is environmental pollutions. Although the governments are themselves one of the factors to the environmental pollution, by the establishment of efficient rules they can be the great help to save the environment. For example, there are many factories with harmful operations for natural resources such as polluting the rivers and underground waters and can be stopped by governmental rules.
Another one of serious issues is population growth. It can be beneficial for the countries that are facing the lack of workforce, but increasing in the population brings with itself more consuming. It can be a minus because earth planet resources are finite. For instance, a recent research conducted by MTS University researchers in 2016 shows that the limiting of water resources is the main issue of our planet and more population is equal to more water consumption.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about most pressing issues for governments and inhabitants of our planet, my personal sentiment is that the problems related to population and the environment are severe and serious.
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but, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36514522822 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21310825655 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535269709544 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5706081631 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273298888412 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928702936301 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803165391673 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182518693258 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904097565487 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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