Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries.” According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?
Nowadays, the xenophobia in western countries has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “what solution can be proposed by the government and individuals to address the xenophobia?”. It is a widely held view that the causes of the xenophobia must be revealed, whereas I tend to believe that numerous action must be carried out to solve the problem of xenophobia in western countries.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the xenophobia has become prevalent in the western societies. To put into consideration, I express why this event has occurred. First and foremost is that the western countries think that the resources that belong them are being consumed by the migrants and it is against the citizen’s rights. Secondly, it can be argued that there is a sense of hostility, racism, and nationalism among the majority of western people that encourage them to be agreed with the xenophobia. In addition to this information, the migrants use the western’s job opportunities to profit from the high living standard. A very tangible example to illustrate would be the Germans who are reluctant accepting migrants in their country because they believe that wide variety of crimes rooted in immigration.
However, there is no doubt that various solutions must be considered. One possible approach is to obtain tougher regulations against the xenophobia. Another alternative approach would be holding the educational session to raise the public awareness. Lastly, the western countries should be prevented to hate crimes and hate speech.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the prevention of the xenophobia among the western countries must be taken into account. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ophobia in western countries has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37293729373 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09724324638 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8718823204 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342300953376 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105476130685 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933674870627 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203838014583 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116435652978 0.0609392437508 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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