64)Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.
Many people dream of owning a business and see it as a way to control their own destiny. Whereas, some people enjoy to work as a employer. Although, i prefer to run a own business, however it doesn't require any special skills, running a business takes determination, patience and an understanding of business principles.
First of all, by owning a business you control your own destiny, you be your own boss and get to follow your passion. Every entrepreneurs have their own dream to run the business such as the way it should be planned, controlled, organised, interviewing powers and many other...
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Sentence: Every entrepreneurs have their own dream to run the business such as the way it should be planned, controlled, organised, interviewing powers and many other things.
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