Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people
In any relation among people all around the world, anyone expects to hear nothing but the truth. However, sometimes it becomes an unsolvable problem that maybe changing the truth helps in a better relation or not. In my opinion, truth is not always the most confident approach, but it is the best since you give the chance to be trusted or get a wider knowledge of your behavior, thoughts and even your disabilities.
The first aspect to point out is that when you try to tell the truth, you are making a better relationship based on trustworthy. Most of us experienced that if any individual lies, we have a feeling that he/she is not possible to be a confidant person and you might not ever tell your secrets to him/her. The film "Liar, Liar" depicts a lawyer that exemplifies such individuals. He lied in order to not disturb anyone's reputation, but soon he came to conclusion that maybe his lies was the only reason that no one liked to trust him, even his son.
Another point deserving some word here is that most of people prefer lying because they find it horrible to let others know your disabilities. In my point of view, your friend will know your disabilities sooner or later, so it is better to tell the truth. In this way you can also find out about his/her reaction, sometimes your friend might have those as well and therefore you can find a better solution and help together to solve this problem.
In a word owing to aforementioned reasonable causes and elucidations described in previous paragraphs, it is appear to be good to draw the well founded conclusion that, telling the truth is the best way which helps you to be trusted and not to hide your disabilities to let your friend to have a better knowledge of you and also let you know his/her weaknesses.
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Sentence: He lied in order to not disturb anyone's reputation, but soon he came to conclusion that maybe his lies was the only reason that no one liked to trust him, even his son.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a negator
Suggestion: Refer to to and not
Sentence: In a word owing to aforementioned reasonable causes and elucidations described in previous paragraphs, it is appear to be good to draw the well founded conclusion that, telling the truth is the best way which helps you to be trusted and not to hide your disabilities to let your friend to have a better knowledge of you and also let you know his/her weaknesses.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and appear
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.236 4.7
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