Animals need to be freed from zoos. Do you agree or disagree?
Every creature on this earth has freedom to live on it’s own will. Each animal get accustomed to their own habitat, and spend their whole life in their habitat. However, human beings are using the wild animals and birds for their own advantage. Zoo is the place where animals and birds are kept in cages and feed them regularly. I believe, the animals need to be freed and leave them back to their earlier habitats.
First, much of the wild animal’s behaviour has been changed. Animals such as Lion, Tiger are brought into zoos, they are regularly fed with the food. But, after some time it sta...
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Each animal get accustomed to their own habitat, and spend their whole life in their habitat.
Suggestion: Each animal gets accustomed to their own habitat, and spends their whole life in their habitat.
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