Are books more important than experience?
The books reading is one of best hobby from my childhood. some time one particular book is one of best friend. we read and learn books form our school days. book is one of best teachers in our life. But, still we learn form book it is not sufficient now days. the practical knowledge is vital. this practical knowledge comes from experiences. so, i think experience is more important than read the book.
The books teach us only theory knowledge. such as how to procedure is works , how to behave in particular situation. we cannot gain live experiences from book. so for experience we need the practical knowledge. it comes through experience. The my brother had some problem while talk English. he red many books how to talk with other peoples. but, still he had problem with other people. after few he tried with his friends then he got experiences of talking English. now he can speak fluent English.
Now days technology is moves so fasts. new version of software introduce and upgrade. books are the print media. once we print book is can uses long life. but in software new version update new things come up with such new up gradation. printed book has no value after new version software come in market. so it is completely waste of materials. The Microsoft introduce windows 7 version. "how to use windows 7" book has been publish after few days. but within six month they revamped new version windows 8. it waste of printed book windows 7. that means practical experiences we get from new software and operating system not from book.
In factory or industry workers are not educated. due to experience of particular field they get promotion. for example, one of uneducated worker had five years experiences on particular machine. and one educated worker join same machine. due to more experiences company can give job for experiences people rather than educated. in corporate life experiences matter important rather than education.
But book give you basic and fundamental knowledge of subject. before you move to the practical it vital to read book. it helps to understand many subjective things. if you not read the books and directly goes to practical experiences some time it is so venerable.
So, finally taking all point into account we conclude that experiences is matter a lot in life. without experience we nowhere stand in world. there is books important factor of life but not more than experiences.
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