Is college best time in the life?
Generally speaking, attending to the college is the most important part of a person's life because it can create their future. It is the opportunity to meet new people and make new friends. There have always existed two points of view. Some people think that college years are the best time in a person's life, but others disagree. As far as I am concerned, I vote for the former choice because of three reasons as follows.
Firstly, we can find our most close and loyal friends in college. Although maybe some of our best friends are not from college, but college is one of the best places to find close friends who are very similar to you.By way of example, I can recall my first days of college, I was very depressed because I missed my family a lot. One day I met a girl in our chemistry class. Her name was Mary. We talked alot about our situation and our feelings, and then we decided to share a room. This way we missed our family less. We were always together, we studied together on weekends, we went to intresting places in the city, and after a while we felt that we are very close to each other. Now after ten years we are still best friends. This experience was one of the sweetest experiences of my life. Therefore, as you can see, I really enjoyed my college years.
Secondly, in college you can experience many challenging situations. It is correct that sometimes college life is monotonus and not fun, but very often you experience something new. For example, I remember the interesting trips that we went when we were students at college. I never forget our vacation to Venice. The city was really fantastic. Every night we went on a tour of a different neighborhood of the city. Seeing those archaic buildings and canals instead of streets made us feel as if we were a team of adventures traveling back in history. That was one of the best trips of my life, and I never had another experience like that after college.
In conclusion, as the English proverb goes, each coin has two sides. Although college may have some hardships, like being far away from your family or having to study hard, but the advantages are more and the experiences that you gain are really great. Based on the arguments explored above, I am of the oponion that college years are the best time in a person's life. No other experience can be so amazing and fantastic.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2013-11-20 | Setare1362 | 80 | view |
- What idea do you think is better? Keeping old friends or find new friends? 70
- Is college best time in the life? 80
- Do you agree that people should put all their time on enjoyment rather than doing other things or not? 60
- What is your idea about telling the truth in all situations. 70
- Is money important in our lives? 40
Sentence: We were always together, we studied together on weekends, we went to intresting places in the city, and after a while we felt that we are very close to each other.
Error: intresting Suggestion: interesting
Sentence: It is correct that sometimes college life is monotonus and not fun, but very often you experience something new.
Error: monotonus Suggestion: monotonous
Sentence: Based on the arguments explored above, I am of the oponion that college years are the best time in a person's life.
Error: oponion Suggestion: opinion
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.889 21.0
You wrote: because of three reasons as follows. But there are only two reasons.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 429 350
No. of Characters: 1879 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.551 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.38 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.385 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 119 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.016 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.429 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.186 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5