Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
People around the world learn their lesson mostly through their own experience and usually they forget the consequence easily if they get it from other’s or just hear or read from books. According to these outcomes, accepting the suggestion from elder could be a better choice for those who has never met a difficult situation which might has a great impact to their life. And there has no toleration of any kinds of mistake. So I strongly agree with parents should help and make the important decision for their teenage children.
Although, the joys of making some own decision are not that easy...
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