Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The younger you are, the healthier, the more energetic you are and the less responsibilities you have. That is why I believe that young people enjoy life more than older ones. When you look at the face of the people areound you, most probably, you will find that younger people are always smiling or laughing which is not the case for older ones who look sad or angry.
First, Young age equals good health which means you can move around, make adventures, climb mountains, plays sports. A good example, I was playing with my teacher and we made a running competition for a very short distance. I was able to run much faster than him while he was very tired although the distance we planned to run was too short. He said to me, 'I'm too old to compete with you". That is why younger people have more chance to enjoy their life within different activities which the older people can not do.
Second, the younger you are, the more energetic you are. You have chance to travel to far countries, learn about different cultures, communicate with other people. My younger brother had a trip last month to France where he visited many touristic places like Eiffel tower, the Louvre museum and other places that I have never been to. Since I'm older than him, I was not able to join him in this trip. I was busy in work while he, as a student, has a holiday and can freely enjoy his time.
Third, When you are young, you have less responsibilities. Moreover, you have someone to care for you and look after you. Before graduation, I have really enjoyed my life. I have my parents who give me pocket money and I do not care for getting money. Now, I'm a graduate student and I have to look for a job to make money and to earn living. Even when I get older, I have to get married and my responsibilities will increase and I have to take care of my family as well. Why do not the one just remain young to enjoy his life?
As a conclusion, Younger people have better health, more energy, and less responsibilities. They can enjoy their lives much more than older people.
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