Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no usafeul purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
All About The Zoos
Zoos are places where all animals is gathered together to make their lives and are taking in protection either sage ones or not. Almost all of pepole love animals. And the zoos are very useful places to see and recognize them. So, I disagree toward this situation because, the zoos have very useful purposes. There are so many reasons why the zoos are beneficial ; three of them are; protection of decreasing numbers’ of unique species, development for the learning of children and keeping the ecosystem in balance.
Nowadays, number of unique species are decreasing by gaining acceleration. So, the zoos are the most suitable places to keep them. For example, for last years, very special members of pandas have been kept under protection of government by settled in the zoos. This is very good investment for the next generations. The second reason which is , the zoos are important for learning of the children who are between two and six years old. Before their school eras they are always starting to recognize environment. By the help of the zoos they can be taken by their families to be familiar with all kind of animals at the same time. More over, keeping their species under protection will give a chance kids to learn, see and may be touch them. The last thing that, sage animals are away from the habitat. They could not eat the types which are weaker than the wild ones. The habitat can be in balance in this way.
To sum up, through all of the esssay I have been talking about the beneficial aspects of the zoos. I disagre with the idea that is mentioned in the question because, as it is seen there are lots of beneficial purposes.
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