Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Young people enjoy life more than elder people do.
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I agree with the statement that young people enjoy the life more than elder people because of so many reasons.New technologies has developed now.Today we are in best system with luxurious lifes.
Now we have new technologies so that we can complete our work in few minutes.Best example is computer.It can hold all the information what we want to save.We can browse anything from the internet.We can do money transfer from internet, no need to go to bank and wait for a longtime in a line.Today we have wireless phone connections so that we can contact with any person in the world.Today we have multiplex theaters and imax to see the movies.Our elder people didn't have all these facilities to enjoy.
We are going to restaurants as frequently as possible.If we don't like the food in home or if we not interested to cook we can order the food by a phone call.they only deliver the food to our place.
Nowadays we have more freedom than our elder people.Enjoying our college days with movies,weekend parties,pubs.Planning tours to our favourite places,doing adventurous things like trecking,sky falling.These all are not there during our elders life.My dad used to regret on this that they don't have all these adventurous things in their college life.
Everything that is inventing now is to make our life more luxurious and to enjoy more.Modern cars,bikes,televisions and projectors everything is to double our happiness and to make our more exciting.
To conclude,i always believe our generation enjoying more than elders and also i am sure that our next generation will enjoy more than ours.Today young people motto is work for five days to earn and enjoy two days to full extent.
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