Do you agree or disagree students in mordern world are not respectful to their teachers like students in the past.
Personally, I disagree with the statement that students in the modern world not respective to their teachers like students in the past.Personally, I am in the opinion that as in the past, student do respect to their teacher. Even though individual student may have different degree of respect, in overall, they do respect by greeting when they meet, by asking for final idea of their concern in important thing of their life and following their guidance whenever they feel good in their real life.
To begin with, I think that student of modern age also do respect to their teacher as in the past times.Even though, having and showing different style respect, eventually, they respect to their teacher.I find that, as in the past time, student do respect to their teacher by doing greeting and showing concern about him or her.For example, my friend Binda and I do greetings to our teacher when we meet and talk about our study and family related thing for at least a couple of minutes.
In addition to showing respect at the time of meeting, I feel that the most of the students including my friends and I always go to see our best teacher for his advice when we have critical issues.For example,when we were studying at university, we went to meet our teacher for solving the problem efficiently.He appreciate us helped to solve the problem we have.Though, that problem was not study related,ultimately, he supported us and teach the lesson for preventing from that problem in the future time.
Finally,In combination of showing and doing respect at the time of meeting, seeking advice from the teacher in difficult condition for better ways, I feel that nowadays student follow the direction given by their teacher. I find that in most of the time, the students follow the guidance provided by their teacher because these directions and guide things are very beneficial for their future life. As a personal example, I always follow my teacher's advice and direction to improve my study for selecting my career for the future.
By way of conclusion, in considering the points I explored above, I am in the opinion that current students also do respect to their teacher as the student did for their teachers in the past time.
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Sentence: He appreciate us helped to solve the problem we have.
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Description: The fragment He appreciate us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace appreciate with verb, past tense
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Need to improve the language. A lot of repetitive words.
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.447 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.606 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.732 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.179 0.07
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