The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
She never closed her eyes, when my sister wanted to accept at Harvard University. Day in day out, she crammed into a room with no open till finally achieved her goal! This is just “one” evidence of the expression “Never, never give up”. Most of times we cast doubt on our goals because we cannot go through them; however, still some people exist who strongly insist on their goals. Why, then, have they persisted long time for fulfilling their aims? The reason, in my opinion, is rose from their personality features that they have and time which they consume.
To begin with, success’s most significant feature is perseverance. For example, when I wanted to accept at university, I worked so hard. I used every single opportunity for studying. Less it has occurred that I do not sleep at nights; however, for that special purpose I did not close my eyes all night. All books reviewed several times from start to the end; consequently, I succeeded. So, the significant characteristic in that special case was perseverance.
Additionally, time that once was thought to characterize as trivial thing its conception became tangible. For example, different persons require various times for revealing their intelligence. My mean is that, for an instance, my brother because of his background in learning English needed much less time for preparing in TOEFL exam; however, me because of my weaknesses should consume much more time for that. Nevertheless, that is not to say that I will not get to the candle of him. It just needs not compromising and also believing the expression “Never, never give up”.
All in all, to put the issue into a nut shell, I contended that individuals must not abandon the field of attempt. If they do, remorse and regret for not continuing will plagued them till the end. Isn’t that what you think, right?
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remorse and regret for not continuing will plagued them till the end.
remorse and regret for not continuing will plague them till the end.
The reason, in my opinion, is rose from their personality features that they have and time which they consume.
The reason, in my opinion, is rising from their personality features that they have and time which they consume.
however, me because of my weaknesses should consume much more time for that.
however, i should consume much more time for that because of my weaknesses.
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