faaaarrrrrrdddinnn 58. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Earning money and making profit is the most important goal of each business. Certainly, all of businesses such as banks, factories, movie making industry, and even charities want to find a way for gaining more profit and assets. All in all, among people some believe that, they should do anything to making more money. But, most of people including me oppose this view point and are convinced that, businesses should not do anything to make profit because in this condition they hurt themselves, also they may bother people, in addition doing anything makes our society vulnerable and causes to serio...
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Sentence: This event maybe destroys their lives and annoys them.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: maybe destroy their
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Category: Excellent Excellent
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