Government should spend more money in sponsoring arts than in athletics (like state Olympics team)

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Government should spend more money in sponsoring arts than in athletics (like state Olympics team)

If someone were to ask how we govern ourselves today - under what arrangements do we live together in society - the answers must be government, which wield unprecedented power to influence the society and our lives. With funding in either aspect, one could generate productive improvements in its development. After weighing the arts and athletics, I believe that athletics, combined with funding of government, could play a paramount role in our lives and development of countries.

First and foremost, athletics could produce numerous eminent sport stars in different fields, which can set a good...

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