If you could invent something new what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed. Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed.
Since I began to study economics, I have thought about developing and expanding e-money concept that I believe it will lessen some problems and issues which people and countries face up now. Before mention about its advantages and disadvantages, let us look what is definition of this idea. Definition of e-money is electronic money which refers that all paper bills and coins will be abolished, and all the money will be saved electronically into one card. Contrast to debit and credit card, this card will not have currency unit, the foreign currencies will also be able to be saved in this account...
- Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and telephone have changed the way the people interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your 90
- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position. 75
- If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 66
- If you could invent something new what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed. Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed. 90
- Some people want to earn a large quantity of money, while others want to have comfortable life. Which one do you prefer? Please support your choice by examples. 70
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