parents influence
Parents influence greatly their children for lifetime. I think the personality of people form by two factors, family and society that they are in. from birth; humans are influenced by surrounding, so parents take a big role in growing children, which affects their lives for a long time.
First, parents affect the personality of children. For example, researcher found that if parents smell and watch their children when he/she is playing, the child confidence will be greater than other child who parents always leave him/her alone t home. Whereas, parents can also, be a bad example for their kids. It is difficult for children have normal personality whose have abusive parents and they may become similar to their abusive parents when they grow up.
However, teachers in school teach knowledge but children can learn basic skill such as basic language and basic realize skill. Because of their basic skill that parents teach child, the influence of parents is greater. Also, they learn how to habit in society, for example in restaurant, train and etc. therefore, they can learn social tradition at home.
Finally, parents can also affect children’s study habit. For example, if parents read a lot of book and newspaper at home, they are showing their children how to study by their own behavior. Also, if their read book for them in childhood, they get the habit of reading.
In conclusion, parents are the best teachers for their children. They have big influence on their children’s lives and are more influential teachers than any others.
Sentence: For example, researcher found that if parents smell and watch their children when he/she is playing, the child confidence will be greater than other child who parents always leave him/her alone t home.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to who and parents
Sentence: It is difficult for children have normal personality whose have abusive parents and they may become similar to their abusive parents when they grow up.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to have and abusive
Sentence: However, teachers in school teach knowledge but children can learn basic skill such as basic language and basic realize skill.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to basic and realize
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