People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
All we need in this world is money. No matter how rich or poor they are, everything could buy by using money, like car and home. Therefore, almost people work for one reason, money. However, there is some people who work without thinking how much money that they get. They just do because they are part of work-a-holic. It is a condition while people spend their whole life to work totally, even around a day.
The most essential reason why people work is not money anymore, they like theirs work. It seems like fall-in-love with mate. You will become blind every way you see and think, you just do all the likest thing together. People who work around a day called work-a-holic. They work because passion, every day without exception. They also do not have much time with their family or friend. Actually, they like make relationship with business-partner, having long-conversation about project, and share about real-condition in business.
A workaholic is also think more to find better solution. That is why they are not think about anything else like problem in their family. For instance, I have work-mate who always get overtime. Before, I think that he just want collect more money but then I know that he likes his position now. Hence, he becomes individual person while he works, no body can talk with him. He quit silent and serious, he also use weekend-time to work. Can you imagine how busy he is?
Sometime when weekend comes, they also work full-day. I cannot imagine how pity I am while doing this because I need holiday. People like this do not need vacation because for them work is like playing. They really enjoy that moment and also think they can be relax while do it.
In conclusion, the most important thing for people who work more is workaholic. They like their job and fall in love with it.
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