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A person should never make an important decision alone.
Decision-making is of utmost importance in this competitive world. It is right being said, 'Plan out your work and work out your plan'. People must clearly plan and ponder over a variety of factors, before arriving at a decision. Hence, it is not always good, to arrive at an important decision alone. One must involve others in making an important decision, for it to be effective.
First of all, when a person makes a vital decision alone, he can be affected by his personal bias. For example, in the evaluation of writing responses for standardized tests, mo...
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Sentence: On the other hand, if just one rater is involved, then the score can be marred by personal choice or bias.
Error: marred Suggestion: marked
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No. of Words: 597 350
After topic sentences, you need to argue why, then put examples to support your arguments. Doesn't need two examples for one reason.
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Score: 28 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 35 15
No. of Words: 597 350
No. of Characters: 2711 1500
No. of Different Words: 289 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.943 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.541 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.596 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 187 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 142 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 90 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.057 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.887 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.249 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.457 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.091 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5