Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and
replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to
support your opinion
Inspite of the fact that historical buildings are important to know more about what happened in the past, many of them are nowadays destroyed by the city administration in order to set new buildings for people coming from countryside to the city-center. Personally, I strongly support the idea that historical buildings should be destroyed by authorities in order to open new settlement area. Rapid growing of population, danger of these buildings and huge amount of money to restore these buildings are some of the considerable reasons why they should be destructed.
First of all, rapid growing o...
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Sentence: In addition, along with the excessiveness of the population, these buildings can sometimes be dangerous for the society, as they are quite old structures and are avaliable to be collapsed.
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Sentence: There was, for example, a historical bulding collapsed in my city, on account of which at least twenty-one human-beings walking in the street died during the collapse.
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Sentence: When starting to revitalize one of them, we must pay much money for a company, which involves in restoring it, and for contruction chemicals that are need to be used within this process.
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Sentence: All in all, for many communities historical buildings are excessively important on the grounds that they can learn indispansible information from their antecedants; however, if we want to create a well-planned, safer and more educated society, we must sometimes destroy such buildings.
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