some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Other think access to so much information creates problems. Which do you agree with?
In 1970s, when the Pentagon started using computer network between its military sites, later becoming known as internet, no one would ever, in next decades,predict such communication medium will become so routine for every one that living in a world with no internet access is almost unimaginable. With internet, any kind of information are at our fingertips. However some believe this is not always useful. Although being exposed to millions of uncertified and probably contradictary information may be harmful sometimes, I believe, overally, information provide by the internet is helpful to the...
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Sentence: With internet, any kind of information are at our fingertips.
Description: The fragment kind of information is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
information provide by the internet is helpful
information provided by the internet is helpful
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 387 350
No. of Characters: 1953 1500
No. of Different Words: 217 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.435 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.047 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.828 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 144 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.188 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.35 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.812 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.528 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.156 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5