Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money on our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Nowadays, there are many countries spend a large mountain of money in the outer space traveling . Recently, there are some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space, whoever, some people think governmens should spend those money on our basic needs on earth. I strongly agree with this opinion . because our planet need more attention to its environment peblems, and many people still straving to death in many parts in our world.
First of all. Our planet need more researches to solve the environment problems. For example, the air pollution increasing day after day on the earth which cause the whole in the ozone layer. This pollution decays from the badly consumtion of the human being. I think this problem deserve more care and attention from the governments instead of spend money in outer space traveling they should offer a constant badget to fund such these researches because the outcomes of them will benefit all the human kind and helping to prevent problems in the future.
Secondly, governments should spend much money to support and help the people who starving to death in many areas in our plants. Because. the progress in our life could not stop or prevent the poverty and the hunger all over the world. For instance, we can see and read in many media resources about the hunger in different areas . the question now is; who could the governments help those people . I think the answer is very simple. By spending more money in supporting the hunger people with food, and helping them to find their food resources. It interested to travel exploring outré space, but just in case we can find a solution to our planets problems especially the hanger issue. Because , it is not make any sense spending pillions of money in such these tripe and try to find another places in the universe ,and the people in the earth can find the enough food to live in.
Finally, I think governments should spend a large mount og money in environment researches and apply the results of them to make benefits to the human kind. Also, the governments should spend more money in helping the hunger people in different places in the world. In case we can find a solution to our planet's problem we can think about discovering the outer places and arrange the traveling to their.
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Sentence: I think this problem deserve more care and attention from the governments instead of spend money in outer space traveling they should offer a constant badget to fund such these researches because the outcomes of them will benefit all the human kind and helping to prevent problems in the future.
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Sentence: Secondly, governments should spend much money to support and help the people who starving to death in many areas in our plants.
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Sentence: In case we can find a solution to our planet's problem we can think about discovering the outer places and arrange the traveling to their.
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Sentence: Recently, there are some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space, whoever, some people think governmens should spend those money on our basic needs on earth.
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Sentence: I strongly agree with this opinion . because our planet need more attention to its environment peblems, and many people still straving to death in many parts in our world.
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Sentence: This pollution decays from the badly consumtion of the human being.
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Sentence: I think this problem deserve more care and attention from the governments instead of spend money in outer space traveling they should offer a constant badget to fund such these researches because the outcomes of them will benefit all the human kind and helping to prevent problems in the future.
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Sentence: It interested to travel exploring outr space, but just in case we can find a solution to our planets problems especially the hanger issue.
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Sentence: Finally, I think governments should spend a large mount og money in environment researches and apply the results of them to make benefits to the human kind.
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