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Summarize the lecture you just heard and explain how the reading supports the lecture.
The passage outlines the invention of computer and gradual improvemnet in the technology. Whereas, the lecture compares and contrasts the older and newer viewpoints regarding the use of computer and also expalins how it has changed the modern life agreeing with the content of the passage.
First of all, the lecture supports the idea of the passage by stating that computer has an greater impact on the modern civilization and many works can not be expected to get done without computers. He further contrasts the way people were communicating in the past to the modern use of computer for comm...
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Sentence: The passage outlines the invention of computer and gradual improvemnet in the technology.
Error: improvemnet Suggestion: improvement
Sentence: Whereas, the lecture compares and contrasts the older and newer viewpoints regarding the use of computer and also expalins how it has changed the modern life agreeing with the content of the passage.
Error: expalins Suggestion: explains
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 9 12
No. of Words: 217 250
No. of Characters: 1111 1200
No. of Different Words: 125 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.12 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.753 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.13 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.42 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.687 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.189 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4