The given statement is sensible and I totally concur with the idea that the advances in technology will lead our future generations into a world filled with machines and robots which may replace man some day! However, anything in great measure deviates us from the basics. Therefore personally i feel that the students should still be able to study in the traditional method whose positive attributes cannot be substituted..Below are the reasons why.
First, there are lot of differences between the student taking classes at school and at home by himself. Major polarity differences may arise in the patterns of their personality development. The child at school is more likely to be optimistic and can co-relate, co-operate with his friends; confronts the circumstances better than the other. This may even result in a child who is more extrovert, brave and realistic.
Second, learning the lessons in a traditional classroom set up will encourage children to understand the concepts better, develop reasoning skills, enable them to compare, contrast and compete with each other. Moreover, the students are often corrected and scored at schools which keeps them updated with the information and gives them a chance to mould their performances by strengthening their weaknesses.It not only helps the students to develop relations at school but teaches them how to behave in public and to communicate in a better way.
All in all, in my opinion it is well served if the students study at traditional school where they can co-relate,compete and learn to communicate in a better way; than they would learn by sitting at home, spending time watching unnecessary information which is not worth doing at an early age as this.
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