Issue task-
"Question authority.Only by questioning accepted wisdom can we advance our understanding of the world"
"Knowing yourself is the beginning of all the wisdom" .One needs to examine himself before questioning others, for introspection is a worthwhile undertaking.
Questioning the authority is not the only way to advance our understanding of the world. It is the compilation of wisdom, knowledge and discernment that gives better insight and understanding of the world. Nothing is too greater than questioning ourselves in the first place and to draw a strong evidence to defend ourselves before an act of questioning the authorities is planned.
It is when the authority has failed to maintain the cause and purpose of the requirement, that questioning the authority becomes relevant. Opposed to the cited statement that 'only by questioning can one advance their understanding' is based on lack of replete endorsement. Can one question someone, when he himself is at fault? This can lead to a serious danger of any firm to have such a person. On the other hand, if one is honest and dedicated to his work it would be right on his part to question the authority at blame.
Honesty is the first chapter in the book of wisdom. No-one can please anyone without honesty. Therefore, it is required of a person to be honest and just in depth before taking any high stake decisions on questioning their authority.
In conclusion, perhaps, introspection may not be as detrimental as questioning the authority. Without concrete self-assessment, questioning the authority may lead to disaster. On the whole, it would serve better of an individual to evaluate themselves than to question someone. The recipe of advancing understanding of the world needs effort, dedication and sincerity as the key ingredients.
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Sentence: Opposed to the cited statement that 'only by questioning can one advance their understanding' is based on lack of replete endorsement.
Description: The fragment one advance their is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace advance with verb, past tense
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Score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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