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TOPIC# 17 SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THEY CAN LEARN BETTER BY THEMSELVES THAN WITH A TEACHER. OTHERS THINK THAT IT IS ALWAYS BETTER TO HAVE A TEACHER. WHICH DO YOU PREFER?
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Sentence: On this grounds, if you study alone, you can stick to this schedule, choose what to study, and when to study, thus get the most out of it.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and grounds
studying alone have many benefits.
studying alone has many benefits.
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Need to polish sentences. Most of the sentences start with the subject 'you':
if you study alone, you can stick to this schedule, choose what to study, and when to study, thus get the most out of it. Furthermore, if you study alone, you can vary the study time duration and take a break once feeling exhausted, or bored.
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Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 436 350
No. of Characters: 2007 1500
No. of Different Words: 232 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.57 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.603 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.414 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.957 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.76 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.609 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.316 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.46 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.199 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5