Topic# 21 In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.

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Topic# 21 In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.

Why people are living longer can be discussed from many aspects, but, as far as I am concerned, nutrition and healthcare have been the most struggling terms for human beings for many centuries. Regarding the most vital needs of man, I believe people’s lifespan has expanded for two main reasons. First, recently, medical science and healthcare have improved a lot. Second, now, we eat better than we used to.

First of all, improvements and achievements in medical science have been very significant, lately. Nowadays, cures for many diseases that had been unknown and incurable for years, are a...

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Do not make something new at the end: ' but they face many new problems related to the modern lifestyle.'

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