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TOPIC# 26 It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?
A sound and safe recreational facility is welcome everywhere, although it would cause some inevitable problems such as traffic jam and excessive noises. Regarding the fact that all movie theaters in our city are not in good conditions, I would appreciate having a new movie theater in our vicinity, since it would bring many goods such as prosperity, entertainment facilities, and job opportunities to the neighborhood.
First, it is obvious that a movie theater is a very suitable place for people to spend their spare time watching the latest movies with their friends, families, and their belove...
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Sentence: Having a movie theater in the vicinity would probably eliminate this scenes.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and scenes
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 380 350
No. of Characters: 1905 1500
No. of Different Words: 202 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.415 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.013 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.702 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.725 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.344 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.555 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5