the movie theater has a key role in our life. It can provide nice space in our neighborhood. Some people support this plan and some disagree. In my view, It can be positive for two important reasons.
First, the opportunity for the job would increase. For example, if a movie theater builds in my neighborhood, they need some workers that are good for people to live here. moreover, they need receptions acter or other people and student that study in art school can communicate with acter in teacher and choose a job in the future, In another world, their self-confidence is increased because they sure there are a place that they can participate and speak with actor and ready until one day can themselves be on there. A gloom place changes with a noisy one easily. Laughing of children and playing in nearby the theater make a good sense in other people. The different topic can be shown neither for adult nor for children too. SO, it can be a place for every age from the child until adult one.
Second, in our free time, we can go and have a good time there. Take myself as an example, when I come back from work there aren't any places in our neighborhood to relaxing and enjoy. If built here people like me certainly be delighted. Because they don't any hobby and entertainment. Movie theatre makes people more creative. Furthermore, they think about what happened in the movie and can be affected on people's attitude. They give lessons, learn about life, and relationships with each other, also. The theater is better than watching TV or go to the cinema. Because it is shown live. We sense the emotion of acter
In sum, a movie teacher is a good place both of entertainment and job.
- TOEFL T P O 47 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Independent TOEFL essay - TPO 7: Agree or disagree? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60726072607 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54488617906 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.2412929352 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4761904762 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123970499937 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415273371449 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036807231807 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086919092688 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431424352385 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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