TOPIC # 33 You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy?
This choice mainly depends on one’s interests and personality. Those who are fond of performing arts would take advantage of every opportunity to attend a play, a ballet dance, or a concert, and some others would rather to spend it on a piece of jewelry. I prefer to hold the latter point of view on account of;
First, jewelry is permanent. A piece of jewelry is so durable that its color does not fade, and it does not wear out by constant use. It would remain for us forever, unless we lose it or sell it. It can even be passed from one generation to another one. For example, I often witness ...
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