A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
What activity do you remember when ask about one of the ancient activities of production that the man used in order to eat? Think about and it is probably that the first answer for this question be the agriculture. This activity has been taken advantage by men for producing food for them, then as an object of commerce and last as way to make profits for a country. In addition, many developing countries earn incomes principally by this activity. As a citizen of a developing country, I would strongly recommend for my country a research center which investigates improvements for the agriculture. ...
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Sentence: What activity do you remember when ask about one of the ancient activities of production that the man used in order to eat?
Description: The fragment when ask about is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace ask with verb, past participle
Sentence: By this way, the revenues given the exportation will increase and the country could leave the category of developing country in a future.
Description: The fragment revenues given the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace given with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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