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Why people move to big cities to settle down?
Immigration to urban areas has attracted much social concern. Sociologist are trying to find out different reasons. My writing will critically present the main causes.
First and foremost, what I put in my priority is working opportunities. Needless to say, moving to big cities, people have more chance to get jobs. With a huge population, big urban always create various needs. As a result, big cities offer a wide range of job from simple job such as car washing, ticket selling to positions which required high qualifications such as doctor, lawyer, architect. Hence, people will have more chan...
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Sentence: Modern facilities and well-trained doctors in these health care system are likely to find exactly the health problems and deliver the best treatment to patients.
Description: The fragment health care system is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
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No. of Words: 514 350 (write the essay in half an hour)
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.118 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.582 7.5
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Score: 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 34 15
No. of Words: 514 350
No. of Characters: 2671 1500
No. of Different Words: 271 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.761 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.196 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.833 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 222 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 142 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 104 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 78 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.118 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.582 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.412 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.43 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5