Explain in detail what you aim to learn within your college of choice APM APS and how it relates to your future goal 100 150 words

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Explain in detail what you aim to learn within your college of choice (APM/APS) and how it relates to your future goal. (100-150 words)

My target of learning within APM are having a good grasp of international management and developing social skills. Academically, I aim to master how to conduct and grow a business with innovative methods in order to maximize social value, acquire the confidence of customers and enable the company to gain a competitive edge over all its rivals in the world market. By having a solid foundation of international business, I can actualize my future aspiration which is becoming a qualified entrepreneur who can lead the company effectively and morally. Socially, exposing to such a multicultural education which gives me several opportunities to cooperate with people who come from different countries, I believe this environment will enhance my global perspective and critical thinking. In short, I believe pursuing undergraduate studies in APM will help me to grow both academically and personally as well as improve my job prospect.

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